The Drake Equation

“Immensely entertaining and imaginative.  A unique take on how first contact would play out.”

"By building the story upon a fictional catalyst but incorporating truth and real past events into the narrative, the reader is given a fascinating look into what could have been, what could possibly be. At times the reader becomes so enthralled that s/he forgets that it is fiction, almost falling into the potential truth of it. The events unfold and build naturally, adding to the illusion that the narrative is more truth than fiction."

"The endless stream of factoids, terms, and issues surrounding astronomy reveal an informed writer who's teaching the audience as much as entertaining. With many space programs facing real-life budget cuts, this form of education is crucial for the masses. To that end, the well characterized politician Sawyer was a nice villain to demonstrate the way politics can get in the way of science."

“An intense, modern take on the film Contact.”

“It has story elements of GRAVITY, INTERSTELLAR, and CONTACT all wrapped into a DR. STRANGELOVE type environment, making this script a creative blend of the genre.”

“The strengths are the script's conviction in its own beliefs, its excellent dynamic between the scientists, and its visually compelling space sequences. The script believes wholeheartedly in its subject, and this allows the reader to feel like they're really part of this world. This script makes strong points about the importance of scientific investment and the future of STEM research in America.”

“The science never breaches reasonable suspension of disbelief.”

“The space ship and the people on board feel like the kind of craft that we haven’t really seen before in too many science fiction projects.”

“The cinematic and uplifting conclusion underscores the philosophical position of discovery over fear.  Science over panic.”

“This script is great and a buyer will absolutely see the potential in it. There is so much psych/sci-fi fun here, with the right talent attachments, this could be a real contender in the market. Studios would love a project like this. It has a little social commentary, a little political awareness, a little humor, a little love interest intrigue, and a lot of talented writing. This script could do very well and could absolutely find its audience at the box office.”

“The script's ending is very clever, while finally giving the audience a peek at a truly alien life form and planet.  Like many of the best space movies, the script ends by finally affirming the idea that there is an unlimited expanse of life out there for humans to find. ”

“Relatable politics is among this material's very best assets.  Sawyer, an immensely hateable villain, is a phenomenal antagonist. His rhetoric is incredibly transparent and upsetting but it feels real, like he could be a real Congressman. The reader can easily imagine that such a character exists in present day politics and it transforms this script into a tragic cautionary tale.  The writer should be commended for creating a thoroughly feasible scenario surrounding alien detection and engineering a plausible domestic reaction.”